“There was no certainty to time, not wrapped in thickets near trash cans, or in the soul. I love the way the earth waits so intently to spring joy in only minutes of life, while the rest of the times, we’re being ourselves. This goes to show that we’re sad, and the show always goes on.” He shrunk to the foot of the bed and fell in interruption of his musings.
Something always disturbed his bad routine, and even if he knew it was bad, and he wasn’t in the ultimate illusion of life, he would go on with it.
It became sadder eventually, as if it were stomached to perish in the freshness of cancerous sunshine. Sometimes he would find a calm amid the pillars of smoke that occluded the bluesy grayness of his eyes, and the hands that wire truth to unreality, which would sustain him another day. From there on, it was dreams and epiphanies arranged to the opening sequence of his construed eternity. He sunk into the lungful sofa on a Friday afternoon, and he mused another sympathetic thought, “I can’t let everything seem so dark blue” but then he thought about nothing. Not about the concept of nothingness and not about its apartment complexes for imagination. Blankly staring the ceiling and the bookshelf holding his definitions, that ecotone was the finale to all his feelings.
The positioning of protective surface over important persona, inspired the closing spark as he ascended toward colour deprived sleep endlessly.
A gorgeous piece of writing. You brought this character to life with texture, light, and shadows.
Bravo.
Oh, on a side note; any time of day is wonderful for navel gazing (as long as it’s not our own).
Sorry, have to maintain that bad boy image. lol
Have an inspiring weekend.
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We do just what we have to do! 😀
You too, have an inspiring weekend.
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Another supreme poem. You are that good.
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Thank you! It means an honest lot.
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Wow. Sometimes I don’t know what to say, your writing is felt deeply where words don’t exist, but are felt.
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That’s beautiful. Have a great weekend, Michelle. 😀
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How do you always find the words? Like not just any words, but the beautiful and perfect ones.
I think I understand now, the highway out of hell. The bliss of the abyss of nothingness. This for me seemed key “I can’t let everything seem so dark blue” but then he thought about nothing.” I love your use of colours in this, you painted that Saturday afternoon with touches that made it seem so real.
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The beautiful and perfect ones probably comes off inspiration from greats such as you and many others. I’m glad the visualization was real, because this wasn’t crazy enough to be surreal..😉
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I already loved the title, and then I had to read this over and over. A possible favorite.
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Wow. Thank you so much!
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A long afternoon’s journey
into the black & white of night.
Reality is overrated when left
stacked in the kitchen sink,
along with the dirty dishes of
time.
As the detergent of holy
self actualization will still leave
the gravy stains of yesterday’s
banquet. Visions of the dream, all our used cutlery sparkling clean.
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I love this response. Do you ever feel that you’re giving away content for free, not that it subtracts from your reservoir of great poetry but you know.
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Thanks Watt 🙏
I am very selective where to let go, and tango … like an introververted torpedo 😎
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This is simply gorgeous…
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Thank you!
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‘Colour deprived sleep’ sums it up so well! Marvellous.
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I suppose it does. Thank you. 😀
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You are welcome.
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Замечательно написано! Спасибо!
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🙂
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A wonderful piece of writing!
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I don’t know..?.. you, your prose… are a metaphor, a simile in the making. Perhaps… a trope in disguise, you are an important person protected in plastic wrap, like a couch, furniture that remains under its plastic protection. Your words will remain steadfast, no stains and I like that.
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Thank you, Resa. It means so much to me that your thought of me and my work that way. And aren’t we all under the protection of our limited capabilities that are metaphors for our liminal explosive inner soul.
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I had to look up “liminal”. Yes, I agree.
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“the earth waits so intently to spring joy in only minutes of life” — ah yes… This is it!! Beautifully put
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