Alright, you caught yourself burnt amid the dark—- And life didn’t promise anything…
The floods of shouts teethed at your chest—right when you were hiding behind your hair— and calling out the depictions of daylight in a barred dimness.
On a dark night, you rose tumbling at the figures of fame and the darkness crashed screaming—in mountainous treasures that way you tread— and wouldn’t be caught gleaming.
You dreamt of an escape—always the same—-cruising your body—wrapped in the coastal breeze—-running, running—-onward the balconies and laughing.
With white lightning and thunderous applause—receiving highly the summer daze–and you said you never wanted to be caught.
But that was just a persuasion from the fantasies that unwind today on the static of your electric buzz—the one that keeps hot your lushly lit love for the stage—in all the great phases that ravel onto new time, and habits—pride that couldn’t commit to your craze.
Then one day, you’ll bend backward in angelic clothes, ball your game to the top—-doe-eyeing heaven—while the hydrangeas glisten in gardens—closing your eyes and lulling you.
Rocking off the toppled floors, slowing down only for who could handle you—inflate you with hopes and answers—suntan, tie-dye short dress, hissing your remains—covering the sparkle in seams.
Nothing lasts forever——-nothing really matters—-nobody is infallible—-nobody indispensable—and that much you knew and more….

Such electricigy on a journey through life and time, crazes and phases. Burnt amid the dark.
“your electric buzz—the one that keeps hot your lushly lit love for the stage”
Lushly written words.
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This character really spoke to me, and so it was relatively easy for me to raise a poem. I’m glad you found it such. 😉
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It flows so easily, so beautifully. I read you, Walt, and think, This…This is what I want to say but don’t know how.
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Watt, not Walt…
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Happens a lot. 😅
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No, it’s the damn phone. Quick mind and slow fingers. Not very compatible.
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I feel the same way about yours!! I don’t know how to command language in a manner as accurate as yours.
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I recently saw tweet of sb whose poetry I love. She was a judge at a poetry contest of one my fave mags. Anyway, she said, reading all these brilliant submissions, I’m thinking – You should stop writing. You don’t know how to write like this. But then again, she goes on, nb writes like I do, so I guess I stick around.
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Well, we’re all jumping and treading tracks while creating poems. And if somebody told me there was a way in which I had to write a poem, I don’t think I’d even want to write.
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Precisely.
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Do you think I’m a man?
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No, of course not. Why?
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In many here on the blog, convinced that i m a man, and thei blatantly write it to me about the comment.. Why?
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That’s why I published family photos
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This character clearly had a great influence on you. Your work is going from flourish to flourish, strength to strength.
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Flourish to flourish- strength to strength. I think there may be unlawful poems here.
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Unlawful???
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I don’t know I thought it would make sense. 😂
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Kind of. But I was seeking clarification 😉😂
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Hi Watt did you see the photos?
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Oh…
Too good for words.
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Oh come on, not too good for your words. 😉
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And yet… sometimes, when I really like something I read, I can’t find the words to express how it made me feel. I’m stuck with “great” or “brilliant” or something like that. This is the case with your piece.
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Haha. Thank you. 😀
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🙂
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The last line is perfection. But, the rush, of that kind of life, lasts until the final breath, and leaves you smiling, even then.
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Agreed. There’s just a chemical electricity in some people, that leaves others breathless.
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Reblogged this on worldtraveller70.
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😁
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Watt, intensely stunning… !!
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Thank you.
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You’re very welcome.
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😌
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Wow I don’t know what to say but wow. I read it twice it’s beautiful Watt. Have a wonderful weekend 🙂
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You too, Michelle. 🙇
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Engaging…stunning, in a staggering kind of way. Very good.
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🙂
I appreciate you reading and commenting immensely!!
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Such beautiful descriptions,I always read the entire post and you hold My attention to the very end.
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Oh, thank you!!
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Okay, I’m officially jealous of your talent. This riveting piece gives me the feel of Bob Mclean’s “Vincent’ which is a very good thing. There is such beautiful, emotional depth to this. Afterwards, you just sort of sit and stare.
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Just sit and stare. I would love that…😉
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You select your words so perfectly. This piece draws us in and never let us go.
Perfectly done.
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Thank you!!
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A ceremonious of life and craze yet, a beauty of abstract words savoring and flavoring
my mouth to your incredible work of delicious poetry. 🙂
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Thanks, Charlie!!
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You are welcome my friend. 🙂
You words and your creative talents mean a lot to me.
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So does yours. I’m jealous of how electronic music is a vacuum of inspiration for you…
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Not, just electronic music. Captain Beefheart, Frank Zappa, & The Mars Volta and many others. 🙂
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Zappa is the man. 🤘
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Yep. Zappa is king. Captain Beefheart is the emperor. 🙂
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Your writing is absolutely stunning… I mean reading it feels like having one’s foot tied to the gas pedal and sailing over a cliff in a fit of ecstasy… I feel so fortunate to have found it just now.
(Was via your “like” on Faux’s last poem, by the way. Very grateful to him as well… for his poetry and for “liking” my oddities from the beginning; his blog and its community has today brought me to another world of writing on WP I would have otherwise missed… and have been half-heartedly searching for…)
“Then one day, you’ll bend backward in angelic clothes, ball your game to the top—-doe-eyeing heaven—while the hydrangeas glisten in gardens—closing your eyes and lulling you.”
Just holy sh*t. 🙏
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Thank you so much. It means a lot. 😀
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Yes, I did already know … and more. Yet, now that the hydrangeas are glistening, I’ve learned what I knew, all over again. Only now, I know it better.
Crazy, but I truly do wander the alleys. I leave the main streets for others.
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The other people need the freeway, we can roam thru roads unexplored.
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