Renegade,
Hiding behind the sunrise,
A reflection whose hands stretch to the night,
While the day rests on his chest.
Him and I, we have common comforts.
As he gambles his eyes to shadows to travel into sleep,
I don’t let him leave me behind,
Because everything has darkened into a pitch-black sky,
There’s nothing here for me anymore,
And I don’t want to be on my own.
A promise summersaults on the string to which I have him tied,
And an escape is not flying in the open for him to create or find.
We become runaways,
Running from all the signs,
Searching for warnings on people’s mouths,
Arresting holy war,
Scratching visions of the road on the walls.
There’s something there for me, places and people,
On these counted cards,
So I shelve him and them on the corner of every chance,
Now, I’ll never be alone.
This piece has a pace to it, a feeling of running, and being… breathless, craving escape, craving darkness, sleep. A connection to the renegade within, an aspect of our selves. This has such atmosphere, and the language is beautiful.
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Thank you very much! It means an extreme lot. ::)
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You’re very welcome. Always so happy to see you’ve posted!
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This song and lyrics are dedicated to your poem.
The feeling of running and feeling breathless trying to save the world or saving ourselves from the darkness of corners. At least that’s my interpretation of your genius master work. 🙂
Nine Inch Nails – Running (HD)
I followed you again this morning
I was close enough to feel you near
Pretending everyone could see me
Just slip away and disappear
They’re right behind you, there’s someone behind you
They’re all behind you, they’re on the run
As good as blind I’m all the time
Somewhere to find, somewhere to find
They’re all aligned, they’re intertwined
You’re undermined, there’s someone behind
They recognize, so hard to find
As good as blind, I’m out of time
I’m running out of places I can hide from this
I’m running out of places I can hide from this
I’m running out of places I can hide from this
I’m running out of places I can hide from this
I had a friend, I think you knew me
I couldn’t seem to make you see
I know they’re watching me and falling
I know I’ll never get away
I’m running out of places I can hide from this
I’m running out of places I can hide from this
I’m running out of places I can hide from this
I’m running out of places I can hide from this
I’m running out of places I can hide from this
I’m running out of places I can hide from this
I’m running out of places I can hide from this
I’m running out of places I can hide from this
I’m running out, I’m running out, I’m running out, I’m running out
I’m running out, I’m running out, I’m running out, I’m running out
I’m running out, I’m running out, I’m running out, I’m running out
I’m running out, I’m running out, I’m running out, I’m running out
I’ll never get away
I’ll never get away
I’ll never get away
~Nine Inch Nails
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I’M VERY SORRY FOR MISSING THIS. its a every precious comment from a very dear friend and a very talented writer.
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Bless you Watt.
I’m looking forward to you posting something new soon. Hope all is well with you…and hope you are staying safe and healthy. 🙂
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Reblogged this on worldtraveller70.
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Eh, I sent you an email through worpress.
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Yes, sorry, I only now saw it. 🙂
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I wasn’t sure I even did that correctly. Lol.
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Love your blog
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Thanks!!
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My pleasure, followed you ☺️
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Wow. I will share this. Great piece of writing and i am lucky to have read it..
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Always appreciate it. 🙂
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very nice blog. simple and very cool. great content also. cheers 🙂
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Thank you!
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hank you and greetings from Italy!
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Great piece, man. Shared it here…
https://grumpysgiftspoetry.org/2020/05/12/breathless-watt/
Just let me know if you have any objections! Cheers!
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Nope, none at all. Thank you!
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“There’s something there for me, places and people,
On these counted cards,
So I shelve him and them on the corner of every chance,
Now, I’ll never be alone.”
Such a beautiful concept, Watt… and so beautifully said. Now this bit of you, in this place, is a treasured card on our own little corner of chance. Thank you. :))
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Thank you so much! If you thought it was worthy of being in your shelf, on the corners of your chance, then I guess I have something to be proud of. 🙂
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Words that warm my heart. Thank you 😊🙏🤗
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🙂
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