Space is this tiny interlude, between the choices, and the love-threads. But somehow, somewhere along these misty aeons, you create dangerously meaning that can substantiate your shadow and transform it into a dream, that you can change, and that you might never have to run away from, simply chase till other turns. And thru the incidents that show so many trails, and a judgment at crucial cruxes of swinging time, you’ll summit upon a place, upon a grief in the nights to foresee the great phases. Discovering sparks, and eyes that glimmer in the blue apocalypse.
An apocalypse, where the sky is asphyxiated by an array of destructive planes, and the vengeance darts in thru openings in the sky, and the guns are shot inward, and the crowds dither and wither and run, while their arms get mangled in each other’s. But to each his own, and so many fall within a district of influences, and those feelings rise only inside of you- perched on a lifeguard stand… The clouds float loudly thru islands of mud, and bodies share and sell themselves in an audition, an attempt to free the captivity, over the sounds of the flat-broke-down minutes, crossed with a funereal submission.
These events that occur in your head in unstable surrounding, become descriptive of all the things you are. There’s no cure for a diseased soul, and no fix for becoming, no highway thru this hell, no separate table to transform mundane water into cherry-cola, there’s a whole lot of nothing amid a vinyl library of troubles.
A library lined with bulleted shelves wearing shades of gloom, and accommodating personality traits, pages of pessimism from an anthology of despondence fly loosely and stick to the head. Some shelves dangle with books of good memories and feelings that stick out in the new load troubles that unleash into limited yet liminal space. And the video camera faces you for your message, your momentous love song, your wooden laments, and your anguish all dolled up in a blank recorder that spans decades of lifetime.
Reads like poetry, this format does give you freedom to elaborate which you don’t get when writing poetry
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Which means, I did well??? 😁
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Of course, it goes without saying, much that is 😀
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How do you do it? Smashing words together so beautifully. An apocalyptic self-ironic dream of a piece, in which the life guard yearns for cherry cola instead of water.
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How do you do it? Always be so kind and make it thru words and come out with such compassionate understanding. Hmm.. I wonder.
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“Space is this tiny interlude, between the choices, and the love-threads.” That was actually my favourite part. Made my heart happy.
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Thank you! I really appreciate you reading and especially putting your precious thoughts into praise. Thank you so much. 😁
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Very gladly (and truthfully) done. 😊 You’re welcome!
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Take care, dear, and thank you.
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Thank you Watt 💜
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I believe I should say that. 😂
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Perhaps, but what you did for me by way of your words left me speechless. I’ll say you’re welcome 🙂 my wise friend.
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🤠. Thank you!
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No highway thru this hell.
Your prose is so poetic.
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Thank you! Hope everything is going well in Belgrade this time around..
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As planned. I’ve had enough stress.
Thanks, Watt.
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I long for that space, that interlude where my mind can sit down at any table it chooses, aided by words like yours that expand and inspire. Never know, maybe the water might change to cherry cola.
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It might. And you can wish for it, and hope for another way to be educated about space until your body is a cage.
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I don’t know whether to hope for that or not!
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Maybe that’s good. I don’t know…
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This is one from the top drawer. One of your best!
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Hey!
Thanks a lot. 🤠
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An apocalypse gives birth to many other apocalypses. An infinite motion.
You used magnificent words.
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Thank you! It means a lot coming from you.
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It is a power! It should be handled with care 🙂
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You would know. You’re one of the most talented people I have read..
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I am honored by your words. Thank you!
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You’re more than welcome!!
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Excellent! You’re a very good writer.
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There is a magnificent space here in WordPress where your powerful writing entertains and amazes us. Great piece.
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Thank you very much, Andrew. Have the best weekend!!
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Watt, this is a great piece. It’s beyond powerful. A chaotic world in which one hardly can find his/her place. Perhaps no one can find anything at the end of the day.
“And the video camera faces you for your message, your momentous love song, your wooden laments, and your anguish all dolled up in a blank recorder that spans decades of lifetime.”
The sign of a broken heart here? Whose heart? The question is rhetorical, for after reading twice this piece it seems like there is no heart left intact in the between of the choices, and the love-threads.
What a magnificent work.
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The sincerity that I feel from your praises is an award. A big one.
A broken heart is born every minute, I had a share sold to me and I bet you’ve had a share yourself. The sheer truth very often is that we prostitute parts of ourselves to keep façades that retain walls and a sense of warm protection. And we shouldn’t, but that’s who we are and what we become. That is the idea I set out with, all it’s consequences and all its unreality.
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My pleasure, Watt.
“The sheer truth very often is that we prostitute parts of ourselves to keep façades that retain walls and a sense of warm protection. And we shouldn’t, but that’s who we are and what we become.”
True. Structure over agency. We straggle to comply with what the society dictates. Generally speaking, we stopped creating meaningful “landscapes.” We allow the “landscape” to created us. One pays a hell of a praise if one wants to be authentic. Authenticity is a heavy cross to carry.
Still I get to read writers of your caliber. I do find plenty of consolation in doing so.
Have a great weekend.
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That’s huge praise! Thank you so very much.
Have the best weekend ahead.
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My pleasure, Watt. I apologize for my typos. my iPhone.
I hope you are enjoying your weekend.
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I am. Hope you are too.
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Reblogged this on worldtraveller70.
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If I didn’t know better… and really, actually I don’t, but I thought of all the mass shootings in the USA when I read this.
Whatever, you provoke thought.
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Not the intention I set out with. But it would be an honor, if this resonated in a real and such a serious issue. Is that what you meant? It has semblance to something worldly, and important?
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I absolutely meant that, Watt! I hear a serious issue, with worldly importance.
I think your prose goes beyond what you know you mean.
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Thank you so much, Resa. I am so happy you said that. You’re totally amazing. I have been binge gazing your art. Truly love the one you did for Charlie Zero. How awesome.
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Yes… I’m trying to start a Street Poetry Art movement. Charlie just sent me a micro-poem to put on the door. Thursday, I’m buying the paint. Looks like I’ll be painting the door next Sunday-Tuesday.
Have you seen my Art Gowns? https://artgowns.com/ They take 3 – 6 months to make, so I’ve been doing in between posts with sketches.
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Wow! Talk about talent I have seen a few of your art gowns, and am completely speechless par your passion for making a cruel world a little prettier.
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Insightful! I made the first Art Gown after my mom died. I did & do want beauty. That’s also why they are made of trash, up-cycled, recycled and repurposed. I will buy old bargain bin fabrics that sit out on the street, and I will buy paint to paint them, if needed.
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Well, you have my eyes ready to read. And soon everybody else’s too. Art will replace politics, maybe only in my dreams.
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… my dreams, too, and my best dreams are when I am awake!
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I agree. Life is dreamy and iconic, until there’s soil falling over our heads, or maybe rocks and we’re singing anthems, waiting. Waiting to get to the end of the song, and the ends of circumstances.
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Well said! Excellent!
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I love your writings Watt and your grasp of the English vocabulary. I always learn a new word or two from you. Today’s new word is liminal. 😀
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I’m really sorry but for some absurd reason this comment got in my spam folder. I’m really glad that you enjoy my work! I enjoy yours too. 🙂
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Thanks a bunch. I guess I’ll be contacting Akismet again for the second time.
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Yeah, that’s probably the thing to do. Thanks again.
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Any time! Thank you.
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I enjoy your blog. Sorry I only pick up on it when I put a post up. I am a follower of yours but you never appear on the Reader. I seem to have a few issues like this. WP need to get their act together – I’m paying them enough! Anyway, I just didn’t want you to think I don’t read your work ~ George
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No reason to worry at all. I understand that their are a lot of problems on WP… I enjoy your blog a lot too. Thank you for commenting! 😁
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This was “darkly”-beautiful. Even though I didn´t understand most of it, where do you get those words from? I had to go to look to Dr.Google every sentence, you made me work…..Good.
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I hope the work was worth it. 😀
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Certainly was
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You are really ahead of your time.
This poem is one of my favorites among your others as well.
Your poetry brings a calmness to our psyche and that’s what we all need right now. Love it! 🙂
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Thank you.
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You welcome, Watt. 🙂
You are the best poet around my friend. 🙂
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Oh, that’s huge praise.
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🙂 Bless you so much, Watt. 🙂
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Are all of these on your site your photos? You take them, they are really wonderful!
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I wish with all my heart that were true. It’s an amazing photographer from Slovenia, Tom Plevnik. He has a blog on WordPress and has allowed me to use his awesome pictures.
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They are awesome, I was going to say, what a wonderful collection of awesome photos.
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You should follow him, you won’t be disappointed.
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Ha, I looked him up and I already follow him and 100% already thought he was awesome, and I’m always wanting to see more from him. Now I can by following you.
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I look forward to our friendship. 🙂
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According to Picasso
creation is destruction.
The danger is multidimensional.
But yes, create dangerously
with a love that sparks the eternal
and not the least bit sentimental 😎
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A lot of sentiment drizzle daily on my eternal danger, that folds multidimensionality into a flap of destructive mentality, that Picasso paints better.
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Sentimental is a thing,
according to my humanoid manual.
I went to Malaga to meet Picasso
only he had gone missing.
But he left a note saying
… “Keep on creating!”.
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Art is a manual thing, nothing compares to truth, no scares that blue isn’t the essence of an era that Picasso painted, it was a freshman generation of degenerate beauty in his mind. And it’s all that now. You, a poet, writing all the news in Picasso’s surrealistic colors and Ginsberg’s Beat syntax have got me waiting for another read from you.
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Paul Gauguin gave me
a ticket to sail the Tiwi Islands.
Here in the tropics, floating
upon the sea of Carpentaria,
there’s an ocean breeze
whispering deep secrets.
The pearl divers of poetry
are spoiling me with a bounty
of bright shiny topics.
But there are shadows
of danger lurking
just below the surface.
Perhaps that’s the place
I best throw my net in? 😎
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That would be the BEST thing!! I can hardly wait.
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There is an ability to define our era as something of ordinance that makes unlawful sense.
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Watt, of a scene from a movie I haven’t seen yet. I love the way you set the scene and flow from there. So amazing.
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Why thank you, Michelle! I love that you thought of it that way. 🙂
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Reblogged this on Alessandria today @ Web Media Network – Pier Carlo Lava.
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Hi! I’m a desperate loser.
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