Hold down the dawn,
I’m going back,
I’ve lost my escape,
I’ve forgotten to end my odds,
I’m unfinished.
Hold back the sunrise,
I haven’t realized the elevated senses,
I’ve scattered things idle,
I’ve loved loose;
Found myself a million miles away,
Touching fingers against pink mist,
Hovering above the horizon,
Wearing nothing but sunlight,
Which disappears as I drift further.
And all I know, all I learnt
Is what I remember;
The last look, the weary world, and the blinding noise.
And I couldn’t say too much because no one could hear. I am unfinished.
But off I go,
I bow my head before the starry sky,
Before midnight,
Before the dusky dawn.
And disappear into the howling infinity, in floundering views and wild blue…
for the pleasure of reading these lines I allow myself to continue, — while life is keeping me as much as possible in dreams, the dreams are keeping me as much as possible aroused
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That is beautiful. Thank you for reading and commenting!!
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Your unique style is beautiful Watt.
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It means a lot, Holly, coming from you. 😀
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I sincerely love your poetry. 🙂
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😀
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nice teeth.
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Thanks?
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Gorgeous imagery Watt. And the inner music of this poem is brilliant.
Touching fingers against pink mist,
Hovering above the horizon,
Wearing nothing but sunlight,
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Thank you!! Finally someone mentioned music. Music was spiraling and speaking volumes, turning circles when I wrote this.
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🎶🎶🎶😊
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The best disappearance ever.
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Ever??? Thank you so so much!! ☺️
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Wondrous words!
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Thank you!!
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Gorgeous poetry
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Thank you. 😊
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Remarkable. Sarah
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Reblogged this on worldtraveller70.
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Your words, imagery make disappearing into the howling infinity seem like a divine idea.
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Thanks a lot. It means so much. 😀
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Fabulous
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Your words suck me into your howling infinity of brilliance and magnificence.
To me my favorite of the day and as well as I favor all your other masterful poems. 🙂
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That means so much!!
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You are welcome, Watt.
Happy 4th of July my friend. 🙂
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And to you too! 😃
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🙂 Bless you, Watt. 🙂
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Kerouac is back!
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😁
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Super! 💓
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Thank you!!
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I love this, so much. It’s like, just wait, all of you, everything, even you beautiful world, I’m not finished here.
It is so beautiful it nearly hurts.
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Thank you for pushing me to believe that this was good. 😀
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I hope I managed to convince you, because it’s more than good, it’s excellent.
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You’re too kind!!
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I’m too much or not enough of many things. But I generally like to think I’ve got good taste 😂. And I promise you, I don’t just say the things I say about your writing because I’m kind or too kind or not kind enough. I genuinely mean them.
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