Slaughtered, wired, weary under the cover of stressful notions and truth. Awkward seconds led to a bummer, happy hours to a happy summer. Yet I miss all the sights, mountains, and the long drives, bars of pleasantries, birds in canopied trees, trenched bridging the light that dwindle, fluctuate between nighttime, daylight, icing sugar on the sight, pressing a howling, scowling mood of weather. My length is angry, my eyes trying to recover from the return to truth, I still remember so many things, yet not as clearly as I yearn, as I had earned by simply presenting myself.
Institution and industries, part of a memory forever, evermore magic moments, caught under my sweater from the spills of milkshakes. I miss shooting around the shouts of laughter, and the screams of inner worries. But they were all hidden, hidden under the letters that I write to save a recognition, a coarse cognition, that realizes color and splits its joy. The time in dunes were fresh out of luck, with an abundance of ducks to keep tracks of lines, staying in a hostel was fine. And oh yes, I miss the excitement, the revelry outside walls, outside the realty sewn into jobs that make hateful unoriginality. Inspiration comes from rocks and wells, paintings of Rockwell, texts of young poets, lit by the stars and the moon, repeated in electric insomnia, cherished in mutual friendship, love, and the affairs cracked under the crux of legalities.
Soul, spirit, clung whole around the intracranial handwriting, firm carves of distinctive canvas, uppers pink and purple, factories, burgers and shops around the empty streets, around the Dutch beats, revolving around oceanic renditions of Israeli prayers. Watching movies, silver screens, trash magic, agony fiend.
I absolutely love how the worlds aged, tragic and beautiful.
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Thank you! ๐
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A most beautiful reminder of the definition of poetry left by the English poet, William Wordsworth in a book he published in 1798 with his equally famous contemporarty, Samuel Taylor Coleridge.
Poetry, Wordsworth says, “is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.โ
I appreciated your telling of your Train-Hued Paradise.
But I love this piece which seems to be that paradise recollected. Because experiences go so fast but our memory lingers and lingers and I suppose it matters most what you do with those memories. I love this record. But maybe I am wrong, Poet?
Sarah
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You’re never wrong, Sarah. Thank you so much! โบ
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Itโs nice to reminisce. Iโve been doing a bit of that myself lately. Itโs nice to remind ourselves of things weโve seen and done that make memories even sweeter when shared. Beautiful flow.
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I agree. It’s nice and easy to remind ourselves about them. Thank you, Michelle. ๐
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Have a nice and easy day โบ๏ธ๐๐ผโโ๏ธ
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You too!! ๐
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Always thank you for the beautiful and sweet writing
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Thanks as always. ๐
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This is my new favourite of your work. Prone to reminiscing myself, I relate to both the wistfulness and freedom of past experiences and the relief and wisdom of being in the present moment. So many great lines in here, โicing sugar on the sightโ and the ducks in the lines… (so hard to get ducks in a row…), and โsoul, spirit, clung whole around the intracranial handwriting.โ
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Thank you. I’ve been having my best days, so this just came to me. ๐
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I’m so happy to hear that you are having best days. And that such masterful writing came to you easily.
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That’s very sweet of you!
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I reminisce about the good times back in the days and remind ourselves how we cherish those times we’ve all shared with friends or loved ones.
Watt, this poem is superbly good and like always very moving. ๐
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As always, thank you. ๐
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You are welcome, Watt. ๐
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Your mind works weird
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I can agree to that.
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Love the nostalgic feel of this! Great job ๐
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Thank you very much,Tom! ๐
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Nostalgia is a hopeful thing, slightly dangerous.
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I don’t think I can stop! Its impossible prevent glee from gleaming.
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Yeah, I agree.
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Pink and purple cold turkey entropy
has got me on the run. As the world of nothing new melts under a setting sun,
with a final splash of Maxfield Parrish ๐
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On the streets, where my future is, I talk like everybody’s listening and I laugh like I want to because I remember. My past must love me.
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The past is a foreign country . . .
that ccasionally sends me nice postcard.
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Abundance of ducks !!!
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Thank you for that!!
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Awkward seconds led to a bummer, happy hours to a happy summer!!!
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Yes, it did. ๐
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When I read your work, I feel as if I’m reading something from two different realities. As if you’re partly living in another place, trying to remember things you aren’t supposed to have access to and because of that, what you’re looking for can’t really be found, not in it’s entirety, because it’s tangled up with the here and now and the then and there. Does that make sense?
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Perfect sense in an elusive way, that’s the best kind of quest; a mysterious one.
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